Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

There are still issues.   It wasn't laugh out loud funny, and while it made some good points, and had some good humor, it was everywhere.   There was also a 'let's stereotype the dinosaurs' section, where one section - the brontosaurus - was repeated. 

Had it been just mocking the dinporn fad, or that and dating books in general, it would have worked far better.  Instead, there were some weirdly uncomfortable moments where it became social commentary.   (Particularly the comments about human/dinosaur marriage being illegal in certain countries and states, and making me think of gay marriage.)   I'm just not sure this is the place to make that commentary, especially when it's mostly breezy humor.   The social commentary either gets buried, or it's noticed and there's this, 'wait, what just happened?' reaction.   I was kinda in the first camp then the second - it got buried for me, became super obvious, and then I was left scratching my head.

That being said, it's very on point, and I wasn't expecting that.  It's fun, and it works because it takes itself super seriously.   That seriousness is what makes the actual subject seem so ridiculous, even more so than it would seem dinoporn could be.  

Three stars.   And I was honestly expecting this to be one half, so, color me impressed!

And hmmm.... I wonder if some of these tips will work for Dinobots.   Or Dynobots.