I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
This is despite having the love-triangle trope that I dislike, and the kindly, nay even gentlemanly, vampire trope that I abhor. Somehow this is addictive, though. It's kind of irritating when the author strains how much she wanted to write a serious story though. Really? And yet you chose a Twilight-wannabe trope-ridden story as your serious story?
Okay then.
Perhaps, also, you shouldn't have the huge plot hole of wanting pacifism between the hippy-peaceful vampires and the humans, and yet have them at the same school without telling the human students that the 'night class' are vampires. This is promoting peace how now?
Or having a guardian to keep the humans safe who has a raging hard-on for the vampires? I get it. Creating sympathy, and a tie to Mary Sue. I mean, the female lead, whose name escapes me at the moment. Also, he really, really wants to keep the humans safe, but... sighs. He really, really wants to kill all the vampires. Again, how is this promoting peace?
Or what about the fact that this is just all begging for vioence to break out... And yet, I still really, really want to read volume two.
I hate you, brain.