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"One of the bedrooms was mine, holding a sparsely covered bed and a white dresser."

Holding is an awkward word here.   One of the bedrooms was mine, with a sparsely covered bed and white dresser makes this a little smoother. 

"Even doubting this hope would come true, I still held onto it."  

Ending in a preposition, and an awkward sentence structure.   Despite my doubt, I held onto hope. < -- this also makes it less wordy.