Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus
I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
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39% Then there was a deeper, crashing crack as the machine was pulled into a wormhole and shot into pre-history.
Reed, Katrina (2013-11-29). Ravaged In Raptor Valley (Dinosaur Erotica) (Kindle Locations 212-213). Katrina Reed. Kindle Edition.
Does it feel like the machine broke to anyone else?
42%: but instead of weapons, they carried cameras, recording equipment, and assorted science gear.
Reed, Katrina (2013-11-29). Ravaged In Raptor Valley (Dinosaur Erotica) (Kindle Location 229). Katrina Reed. Kindle Edition.
I like how specific science gear is as far as descriptions go!
44%: They had expected heat, but this was something else. It was so fetid that a few of them actually gagged on the stench.
Reed, Katrina (2013-11-29). Ravaged In Raptor Valley (Dinosaur Erotica) (Kindle Locations 243-244). Katrina Reed. Kindle Edition.
So they have all this technology, and fancy suits, but they don't have anything like gas masks just in case the air isn't breathable? Makes total sense!
46%: “Fine.” Said Brooke.
Reed, Katrina (2013-11-29). Ravaged In Raptor Valley (Dinosaur Erotica) (Kindle Location 252). Katrina Reed. Kindle Edition.
This happens all the time. "I like how the author understands how to use dialogue tags," I said. See? See how easy that is?
50%: We’ll meet meet back three hours .” Said Brooke.
Reed, Katrina (2013-11-29). Ravaged In Raptor Valley (Dinosaur Erotica) (Kindle Locations 274-275). Katrina Reed. Kindle Edition.
No need all words sentence. All characters say so.
Some words need twice twice.
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