Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

I may need to take a break from this, too. 

I'm enjoying it, although I'm also torn; parts of it are really well done, although it could have used a good editing.   The writing itself is competent, for the most part, and there's a large cast of characters that all fit into the story surprisingly well.  I enjoy vigilante stories, and I'm interested in the fact that this is a racially motivated vigilante story. 

Then there are the downsides.   Even a quick proofread would benefit this story.   Because I'm enjoying the story, and the sentences themselves - again, for the most part - make sense, the typos aren't as huge a deal for me as they might have been.   The huge plot hole that a cop planted a gun on someone while a crowd was watching, though?   I don't buy it.  

I don't buy that the DA would ignore this, either.   I'm rolling with it for now, because it seems like the story hinges on it, but it's distracting me a little, which is why I may switch stories at least for tonight.