I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
First of all, this book is falling apart. So long as it holds together until I finish my reread - which is questionable - I'll be happy.
"Robo's cruiser thundered over long-dead railroad tracks.
It rumbled through the shattered shell of an empty warehouse.
It rolled carefully over several side streets now inhabited by weeds and rats."
Thundered. Rumbled. Strong, powerful, sexy words to describe the cars movements.
And then Naha ends with a limp 'rolled carefully.' Not at all anti-climatic.