I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
Good writing, editing, getting facts right. That's not how any of this works.
It's like someone who was totally bored and/or hated Transformers wrote this, and just wanted it done as quickly as possible without any fact checking.
Burn it. Burn it with fire.
Or, y'know, read it if you want to be totally misinformed as to what happened before, with a bridge between Phase 1 and Phase 2 that leaves out much of the important information.