I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
When the dialogue is so cheesy you keep looking around to see if anyone's watching your reaction, because you know you're having one because reading this is so embarrassing you feel for the author.
And then you're like, nope, I'm alone and safe. They are really pushing the 'Simon Williams/Vizh are brothers' angle. Guys, seriously, if you go one sentence without telling us, we won't forget. I promise.
Of course, there is a huge amount of bromantic hugging going on, too.
They don't give a fuck. They do it right in front of everyone and everyone is happy for them. The thing is, I would love to read a story about them as brothers, but not when the writing is so, so stilted. And cheesy. Oh, Primus, the cheese.
Because I love reading Vision when he's happy. But Scarlet Witch and him being the happy married couple is bittersweet; I'm reminded of what he will lose in the near future. And while I love how thrilled he is to find more family, this writing is painful.
Still, overall, I'm enjoying, and continuing to read, because happy Vision is my jam.
Okay, more GIFs than necessary, but I'm killing time before I go in for a last minute shift, since I was asked yesterday.