Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

I have the cover half colored - and that's where the extra two stars come from.   Yes, I'm not going to show it because I"m embarrassed that I didn't make Starfire orange enough.  She's supposed to look like Snooki, and she looks normal.   *facepalm*

But it was fun to color anyway!   And I'm not sure if robots are raining down on her or what, but I made them into silver robot things.  I like thinking that, so please don't disillusion me if it's not the case.  

That being said, this was painful.   I know Starfire is supposed to be innocent of the world of man.   That is, she doesn't really understand the way things work.   It's supposed to be funny, and it normally is.   It came off as stilted here, and the whole sex-obsessed thing didn't work for me.   Then again, I mostly know her from TV shows that were supposed to be kid friendly, so...

It just felt crass, mostly because everything revolved around sex jokes or relationships.   It might have been funny if there was any kind of character development at all.   And I like these writers.  This whole thing just felt flat for me.  

Well, at least there's that cover!  I can't wait to finish coloring this, and I hope to get it done this weekend.