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allhailgrimlock

Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.   

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Separate Orbits
Yael Mermelstein
Progress: 119/427pages
BATMAN #53 ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
LeeWeeksBatman53, TomKingBatman53
BATMAN #54 ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
MattWagnerBatman54, TomKingBatman54
BATMAN #52 ((DC REBIRTH)) ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
LeeWeeksBatman52, TomKingBatman52
BATMAN #51 ((DC REBIRTH)) ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
LeeWeeksBatman51, TomKingBatman51
Infinity Wars: Iron Hammer (2018) #1 (of 2)
Al Ewing, Humberto Ramos
Champions (2019-) #4
Jim Zub, Jacinto Benavente
SUICIDE SQUAD #46 ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
JosLuisSS46, RobWilliamsSS46
SUICIDE SQUAD #45 ((SINK ATLANTIS)) ((DC REBIRTH )) ((Regular Cover)) - DC Comics - 2018 - 1st Printing
JosLuisSuicideSquad45, RobWilliamsSuicideSquad45
Champions (2019-) #3
Jim Zub, Jacinto Benavente

Another bomb

Kevin and the Multicolored Infinity Car of Light - Geltab

68%: “What you've never talked to a car with a soul before?”

 
Geltab (2012-07-27). Kevin and the Multicolored Infinity Car of Light (Kindle Location 57).  . Kindle Edition. 
 
I’ve tried, but have yet to have found one. 
 
77%: smilingwhite
 
Geltab (2012-07-27). Kevin and the Multicolored Infinity Car of Light (Kindle Location 65).  . Kindle Edition. 
 
Spaces between words are a good thing. 
 
Overall, there were far too many mistakes - a couple more - for a story this short.   In addition to those kinds of errors, it tried to be metaphysical and oh-so-clever, but it felt like a steam-of-consciousness writing, which can work in fiction.   But the trick is to make it seem effortless while carefully controlling it all. 
 
This failed at that, completely.  
 
It felt like it was trying very hard to impress with me with speculative writing and ideas, and I found the desperation a little off-putting. 
 
I won't be reading more by this author.