68%: “What you've never talked to a car with a soul before?”
Geltab (2012-07-27). Kevin and the Multicolored Infinity Car of Light (Kindle Location 57). . Kindle Edition.
I’ve tried, but have yet to have found one.
77%: smilingwhite
Geltab (2012-07-27). Kevin and the Multicolored Infinity Car of Light (Kindle Location 65). . Kindle Edition.
Spaces between words are a good thing.
Overall, there were far too many mistakes - a couple more - for a story this short. In addition to those kinds of errors, it tried to be metaphysical and oh-so-clever, but it felt like a steam-of-consciousness writing, which can work in fiction. But the trick is to make it seem effortless while carefully controlling it all.
This failed at that, completely.
It felt like it was trying very hard to impress with me with speculative writing and ideas, and I found the desperation a little off-putting.
I won't be reading more by this author.