Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

This was well written, and the dialogue felt okay until the end, where it got a bit stilted.   More than that, though, the ending felt a bit rushed and forced, which was a shame, because the protagonist - a lonely kid with what appears to be an eating disorder who's bullied at school -  is relatable, and it's easy to feel for him given his situation. 

It all builds up to what seems like an exciting climax, and it's... not.   I was prepared to love this story, and having known nothing about it except how it started?   It was all this story that did it for me. 

I only wish the same time and care had been taken with the ending.   That would have made this spectacular.