Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

I found some pretty embarrassing typos like this: 

"Maybe me and Xnet could help get Darryl out."

Yeah, maybe me could help get Darryl out.   Not I, nope.   Me. 

I'm still not fond of how Ange is initially described: he makes a big deal of how she's not /that/ hot.   And I kinda get it - boys and hormones, and yup, but it still was like WTF at the time. 

However, he comes to love Ange for her smarts and class and how funny she is, and that aspect is never brought up again.   I like how he loves her for her.   So that was kinda a wash for me, but when he starts sleeping with her, when he starts getting super sexual about her, I think about the earlier comment here.   Which is pretty gross.   I know, she couldn't know that's what he thought about her, but, ugh. 

I think I need something better.   Want to sleep, can't because of knee pain.   Am seeing my PCP tomorrow, and have off work again, but I'd rather just be able to sleep.