Grimlock ♥ Ultra Magnus

So far, it's okay.   Trope-y, with a love triangle that is annoying the crap out of me, and not much substance.   It's very simple, and not in the Asimov puts together beautiful simple sentences that underscore the deep ideas way.   It's a shallow simple, which does make it incredibly quick read, even with all the misuse of tenses.  

Also power blue was used to describe a color all the way through the beginning.   It was finally, finally, called powder blue.   

A power blue car, power blue clothes, power blue nail polish.  

This is the only power blue I can find: 

Pool stuff!

Which is clearly not what was meant.   So far I see a two, two and a half star rating unless both the content and editing start getting better in the second half.  Even with that, even with a fantastic ending, it wouldn't gain more than one star because I really don't think anything could save this from the terribad errors in the beginning.