I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
"Agent Destiny enraged turned his expression into a growl as he released the bullets from his gun."
There is so much wrong with this sentence. Missing comma, expression turning into a growl although he wasn't speaking so I have to assume it was a facial expression which makes no sense.
Also, releasing bullets from his gun? I see him pulling them out manually, not discharging his weapon.
For just $200, you can enjoy a full short story full of this kind of sloppy writing, though.