I'm a well read grad student who's bluntly honest about all things, although I try to be most honest about myself.
Maybe this would have made more sense if I knew anything about the game this was based on, but just as a story in itself? It was confusing, it didn't really set the tone for me, and I got lost fairly quickly. I kinda went along because there was enough corporate intrigue to keep me just-barely interested.
It was a relief when I was done. However, the art was amazing, especially during the first half of this story. There were intriguing ideas such as using a jump clone - a clone you make of yourself that you can 'jump' into - for said corporate espionage, and I wanted to see what would go on with that. In the end? That was worth it because that? I didn't see that coming.
But for the most part? If you're not an EVE fan, I wouldn't bother. I certainly won't with anymore should they come along. I'm hoping the next one will be more amusing for me.